作文 corrections please!

Assignment is to write about a prefecture, and what we want to do. Main goal is たりたりする, and たい forms.
I used a couple unfamiliar kanji, and there’s a bit of experimental grammar parts that I haven’t been taught in class yet.
Particularly concerned about the sentence towards the middle about a host family. Not anything super experimental, but more complex than I’ve been taught.
Thanks in advance!

by Kitchen_Film1904

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