Can you help check my word choice and grammar?

I’ve been starting writing blogs since a week ago but now, I want to write more blogs in Japanese language. Still, I am struggling learning its vocabulary and grammar. I want to improve my Japanese writing. So, would you mind helping me spots some mistakes in my writing? Here is the link: [https://blogg7.art.blog/2022/08/27/%e9%9d%9e%e5%b8%b8%e3%81%ab%e6%9c%89%e6%af%92/](https://blogg7.art.blog/2022/08/27/%e9%9d%9e%e5%b8%b8%e3%81%ab%e6%9c%89%e6%af%92/)

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