Big Mistakes: My Japan Itinerary

Am I missing something major, logically, or location-wise for a first-time Japan visitor? This is where I'm going:

1. Osaka (3 days)
2. Kyoto (3 days)
3. Kanazawa (3 Days)
4. Takayama (3 Days)
5. Hakone (3 Days)
6. Tokyo (3 Days)

Do you think that order makes sense? Is anything perhaps a mistake for a first-time visitor or otherwise redundant? I'm unsure about Kanazawa and Hakone. Thanks for all you input!