Correct phrasing of text

I am working on a t-shirt design inspired by the Japanese city pop genre. Down the center it will say

私はシティlポップ大好き

I am wondering do I need the “私” or the “は”, it would give me more space without those characters. Or could I just write シティlポップ大好き and it would make sense.

For example, I am watching a show titled ラーメン大好き小泉さん.

1 comment
  1. I’d simplify this if it’s a graphic design

    シティ

    ポップ

    大好き

    Also you’re in luck they all line up in a square

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