How to make sentence less weird and more natural?

When I posted my drawing the subreddit for sharing art, I had on my drawing sentence “生きたいです…でも,わたしも死たいです“. I Worte this only by knowing some grammar and verbs from textbook and internet and I was accused of using Google translate …
Now I have a question how to make this sentence not sounding so robotic and strange 😅 (sorry for mistakes, English is also not my first language)

by Luckycat1102

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