Family trip focused on shopping more than exploration, did I plan for too little/much in one day? Any advice is much appreciated, and thanks in advance!

Day 1

• Arrival in Tokyo
• Shibuya Stream

Day 2

• Shibuya
  • Shibuya Loft
  • Shibuya Parco (Pokémon Center)
  • Shibuya 109

Day 3

• Tokyo
  • Koishikawa Korakuen Garden
  • Tokyo Dome (Jump Shop)
  • Akihabara (self-exploration)

Day 4

• Mitsui Outlet Park Kisarazu

Day 5

• Shinjuku
  • LUMINE EST
  • Ships
  • Tower Records
  • Isetan
  • Kinokuniya

Day 6

• Harajuku & Shibuya
  • Takeshita Street
  • Omotesando

Day 7

• Travel to Osaka
  • Osaka Station
  • Grand Front Osaka (optional)

Day 8

• Kyoto
  • Shijo & Kawaramachi Street
    • Nintendo Kyoto
    • Takashimaya
    • Daimaru
  • Yasaka Shrine (optional)

Day 9

• Kyoto
  • Kyoto Station
  • Kyoto Porta
  • Kyoto Isetan
  • AEON Mall Kyoto

Day 10

• Osaka
  • HEP Five Mall
  • Hankyu Umeda Main Store
  • KITTE Osaka

Day 11

• Travel back to Tokyo
  • Tokyo Character Street
  • First Avenue Tokyo Station

Day 12

• Tokyo
  • Shopping near hotel & Airport
• Departure from Tokyo