to practice japanese i wrote a fake penpal letter, to see if i can string together something that makes sense. if anyone could tell me how they find reading it, what my mistakes are or anything like that id definitely appreciate it!! i have the book titles is brackets because i wasn’t sure how to write those, would i do it in katakana?
こんにちは、タラです。はじめめまして！
私はニュージーランド人です、15さいです。
猫が大好きです。あんあたは猫が好きですか？
いつか日本のように旅するのです。
もしかしたらに2023？私は来年ヨーロッパに行くつもりです。私はマンガと本よみます！東京グールマンガが1ばん好きです。(six crimson cranes)と(malibu rising)本が1ばんすきです。何がおんがくを好きですか？ラナデルレイ好きです！日本語。。。たかやんとラムパとKING GNU好きです、日本のかしゅがすごいです。
どれほどなかく英語をべんきょうのですか？私は日本語をほぼ2年べんきょう、でも上手でわないです。ハハハ
ご読了ありがとうございます^_^
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hello, it looks fine but there are a few spelling mistakes such as あんあた and はじめめまして but i feel like you did those by mistake. the book titles, or any title in general, if in english, would be written in english. i may be nitpicking here but i feel like you said 私は a few too many times. kanjis are also missing so i have trouble reading/understanding some parts, but my learning style is a little different (preference of kanji over the furigana), so that’s just my issue. the first sentence, you put です twice, you can’t use です that way. “私はニュージーランド、15歳です。” i think it may be better written this way: “ニュージーランドです。あと15歳です。” omitting 私は happens a lot.
sorry if i was too harsh, i myself am slow with studying japanese (have been studying on and off for almost a year, and i am unable to figure out which JPLT N-level i am at because i pick up random stuff from different levels all the time, so I can’t really go in order of the JPLT anyway cause ive already messed it up since i need kanji to read anything, lol)