Proofreading of a script for my Japanese class

My teacher told me to pair up with a partner and write a short script about a job interview, so this is what we came up with. None of the information in the script is true because we are actually just dumb highschoolers. I was wondering if someone with a higher level of Japanese could proof read this please. I will be very grateful and happy to make changes

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c0cWinpvoEo6ZSH0WHeNnDTyUAkyXdFBjoQS8crS354/edit?usp=drivesdk

(Please note I have only taken 2 years of Japanese in American Highschool as well as studied some kanji on my own. I’m trying to get better so please give constructive criticism)