Itinerary check for 8 days in Japan

This is my first time in Japan and my girlfriends 4th time (first time traveling around Japan without her parents). This is what we came up with and she would like a second opinion:

Sep 8. Flight from Vancouver at 12:40PM

Sep 9. Saturday – Narita to Kyoto：
Narita Express to Tokyo Station (round trip ticket?)
Tokyo Station to Kyoto Station
HOTEL: IRORI Hotel

Sep 10. Sunday – Kyoto：
Kinkaku-ji (金閣寺)
Kiyomizu-dera（清水寺） – Three Year Slop（三年坂） – Two Year Slope（二年坂）
Kodai-ji Temple （高台寺）
Gionmachi Minamigawa（祇園）

Sep 11. Monday – Kyoto to Osaka :
Fushimi Inari-taisha（伏見稻荷大社）
Nishiki Market (錦市場)
Get to Osaka
HOTEL: PLUM HOTEL

Sep 12. Tuesday – Osaka :
Shinsekai
Kuromon Ichiba Market
Umeda Sky Building
Dotonbori Street Area

Sep 13. Wednesday – Osaka :
Universal Studios Japan

Sep 14. Thursday – Osaka to Tokyo (Akihabara):
JR bullet train in the morning after breakfast
HOTEL: BEST WESTERBN – Akihabara

Sep 15. Friday – Tokyo :
Go from Akihabara to Shinjuku, check into Hotel
HOTEL: APA Hotel Shinjuku Kabukicho Tower

Sep 16. Saturday – Tokyo :

Sep 17. Sunday – Tokyo to Home :
Check out of hotel as late as possible.
Take train to Narita in the afternoon, go home